One Goodman as Good as Another

March 12th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Denise Tessier

Astonished. That’s the word that most accurately describes my first reaction to seeing a column by journalist Amy Goodman on the Albuquerque Journal’s editorial page Thursday morning.

What initially caught my eye was seeing a woman’s picture on an editorial page column. The Journal runs so few.

Even when it runs a female voice with some regularity (i.e., Trudy Rubin of the Philadelphia Inquirer) the columns generally lack an accompanying photo. Kathleen Parker’s columns ran in the Journal for years before a Journal editor agreed to attach her picture. (Which exacerbates the impression there’s a paucity of female voices on the page. Which would be a valid impression).

But back to Amy Goodman. After realizing the Journal was running one of her columns, I wondered if this was an aberration, that it was picked up from the syndicated column wires because perhaps it was the only one editors could find advancing this week’s trial in Israel (the same week as Vice President Joe Biden’s first visit to that country) related to the death of 23-year-old American protester Rachel Corrie, who was run over by an Israeli bulldozer as she protested the destruction of Palestinian homes on March 16, 2003.

But then it hit me (sometimes it takes a while). Amy Goodman could be there to replace Ellen Goodman. It’s been more than three months since Ellen Goodman’s syndicated farewell essay, “Letting Go,” ran in papers across the country, including the Albuquerque Journal on Jan. 1.

It makes perfect sense. Replace a female liberal voice with another.

And in the Journal’s case, without fanfare, without so much as one of those “To the Readers” advisory letters editors run religiously when there’s any kind of change on the comic strip page.

If indeed, Amy Goodman is to become an Editorial page regular, kudos to the Journal for at least (the very least) keeping the status quo in terms of gender and politics.

But has she been made a regular?

Her name hasn’t yet joined the list of syndicated columnists on the ABQJournal.com Web site. (That list, for the record, carries the names of eight men and two women, including ex-columnists Ellen Goodman and fellow Washington Post syndicate member Jim Hoagland, whose final column ran in the Journal Jan. 3).

Her column that ran Thursday, “Human Rights Focus of Israel Trial,” isn’t on the Journal Web site, either.

So, it’s still a question. But here’s another: If Amy Goodman is to be a regular, will the Journal be up front about it? Lack of so much as an editor’s note could lead to the impression editors are hoping readers (conservative ones, especially) won’t notice the substitution. After all, the columnists even share a last name.

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The Journal’s Embarrassing Error

March 11th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Tracy Dingmann

The Journal made a spectacular error today.

A story, “Businesses ‘Slept’ in Last Election,” by staff writer Win Quigley, detailed some of the comments made by speakers at a recent Economic Forum.

From the story:

New Mexico business people were asleep at the wheel in the last election cycle, allowing a free flow of out-of-state political money to propel progressive and anti-business candidates into the state Legislature, the president of the Association of Commerce and Industry told the Economic Forum on Wednesday.
ACI is working to make sure that does not happen again, Beverlee McClure said.
McClure said ACI, Economic Forum, NAIOP and other business groups will back conservative and business-friendly candidates in the next election cycle and challenge candidates supported by Better Choices, which she said helped several progressive candidates oust more conservative incumbent legislators in the 2008 elections. (Emphasis mine.)

Just one problem. Better Choices New Mexico didn’t exist until the fall of 2009.

The story goes on to properly identify the members of the broad-based coalition of faith-based groups, unions, education advocates and more (including our organization, the Center for Civic Policy), but fails to identify the essential fact that Better Choices did not exist until a year after the 2008 elections.

That’s the embarrassing factual error for which the coalition should rightfully demand a full correction.

But there’s more. In his story, Quigley let a number of McClure’s unfounded assertions stand, including those about a “free flow of out-of-state political money” was used to propel progressive and anti-business candidates into the state legislature in 2008.

In fact, the whole ostensible “news” story was essentially nothing but a fact-free rant by McClure against progressives and the “new, more left-leaning Legislature.”

Was there no editing of this story? Or worse – was it edited… and allowed to go?

I’ll be interested to see how the Journal handles the glaring factual error in this story – and intrigued about whether it will ever deign to explain how it chose to stand by the rest of it.

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Oscar Story A Confusing Jumble

March 10th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Tracy Dingmann

Maybe it’s just a matter of taste, but I didn’t much care for the way the Journal handled its Monday morning Oscar coverage. The giant package on A1 featured a bunch of headlines and pictures but only one story – a bylined one by Associated Press writer David Germain from the ceremony in Los Angeles.

Except it wasn’t really Germain’s story – not entirely. The doctored AP story the Journal ran was edited heavily to include references to winners or nominees with New Mexico ties. Sentences that otherwise made sense were shot through with rather confusing references.

For example:

Other New Mexican conenections to Oscar nominees: “A Single Man” was directed by Tom Ford, who grew up in Santa Fe and who still owns the Ford Ranch in town. Colin Firth was up for best actor in his role in the movie; and “Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen,” filmed partly in New Mexico, was nominated for Best Sound Mixing.

Clearly, Germain’s story from LA didn’t include those details – they were added later by an uncredited Journal reporter or editor. I feel sorry for whoever was directed to jam that information into the story on deadline.

Wouldn’t it have been better instead to just run a short sidebar detailing the New Mexico connections? That is the usual practice for national wire stories that contain local details. It certainly would have been easier to read than the jumbled mess that resulted.

The Journal handled the run-up to the Oscars much better on Sunday, the morning of the Oscars, when it ran a well-informed, stand-alone story on the many local angles by Assistant Arts Editor Dan Mayfield.

One other point about the Monday Oscar wrap-up. My colleague, Arthur thought weaving every local connection into the main story just made the Journal look “small town” and parochial.

Was it parochial?  Perhaps.

Was it hard to read?  Absolutely!

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Union NO?

March 9th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Arthur Alpert

Sometimes it’s hard to tell if a specific Journal headline is biased or misbegotten.

A front-page story in the Journal’s Business Outlook section March 8 dealt with those “Shame On” banners becoming common in Albuquerque.
Reporter Rivkela Brodsky told us the Southwest Regional Council of Carpenters, based in Los Angeles, is behind them. But the carpenters’ organization won’t explain why it hires workers to hold the banners in front of hotels, restaurants and other businesses.

Why not? It’s certainly a reasonable question; apparently, some of the enterprises targeted have nothing to be ashamed of.
Brodsky’s story is lengthy, detailed and seems fair, as do two sidebars. My bias is pro-union but I came away thinking the Carpenters are disserving organized labor.

So why did the Journal headline the (page 7) jump, “Union campaign irks community”? It smacks of piling on.

And there’s nothing in Ms. Brodsky’s narrative to justify it. A builder did comment, “This is a black eye on our entire community,” but that’s different.
Did an editor pluck the rubric from a computer file labeled “Anti-union heads, generic”?

Journal management dislikes organized labor, so this may be editorializing–by-headline. Alternatively, it may be the work of an editor who doesn’t know how to write headlines.

I cannot tell which.

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When Honesty Appears Missing From the Policy

March 8th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Denise Tessier

It seems almost too easy to criticize the Albuquerque Journal for running yet another Marita K. Noon column, because we’ve pointed out her errorssimplistic assertions and lack of expert credentials in the past.

But the Journal’s Op-Ed (opposite editorial) page carries her again today, this time with a convoluted essay headlined “Carbon Tax Honest; Cap and Trade Isn’t” (subscription required), which leads with an unsubstantiated anecdote about health care.

I won’t even attempt to sort out her stream of attempted logic, other than to point out some of the column’s myriad unsubstantiated claims. It’s another example of a column thrown at the public without any kind of vetting, fact-checking or even editing.

Some of the assertions from her column:

Those responsible for getting the hospitals paid for the services acknowledge that getting money from the private insurance companies is much easier than from the companies getting funded through government.

Never mind the mangled English, who is saying this? Noon doesn’t say.

How does this connect to cap and trade?

She answers with:

First, understand that cap and trade is a government plan to deal with so-called man-made global warming.

Love that use of “so-called,” and then she asserts:

While the entire climate change issue is challenged due to the acknowledged data forgeries and plummeting public concern over climate, governments are still moving forward with cap and trade plans.

With this sentence, she asserts that the entire issue is challenged, and offers as evidence unsubstantiated “acknowledged” information, this time in the form of “data forgeries”. And then she declares public concern over climate is “plummeting.” If that’s true, why do climate stories run on the news and Op Ed pages nearly every day?

In fact, just the day before, The Sunday Journal ran a column by a Santa Fe writer whose credentials include a post-graduate degree in climate change and carbon management. In it, Mark Giorgetti asserts that a disinformation campaign is being put out by “promoters of the fossil fuel industries and unregulated corporate expansion.” He doesn’t name them, but this is an apt description of CARE, the Citizens Alliance for Responsible Energy of which Noon is executive director, which claims to support citizens’ rights but is an unabashed supporter of extractive industries like oil and gas.

Unfortunately, the way the Journal packaged Giorgetti’s column can leave the erroneous impression its content comes from yet another climate change naysayer.

The headline, “Climate Controversy a Hoax,” technically is an accurate reflection of Giorgetti’s position (it’s the controversy that’s a hoax, not the science). But those who scan headlines could interpret it to mean climate change is a hoax. And to further cement that impression, the column ran with a cartoon showing a dinosaur holding up a sign that says “Climate Change is a Hoax.” Again, the cartoon actually supports what the column says – the dinosaur who holds up the “hoax” sign is calmly standing while his frightened fellow dinosaurs run to escape the obvious change in their midst: an erupting volcano.

Considering Girogetti’s credentials, his take on global warming deserves to be read, but likely will be dismissed as yet another of the unsubstantiated, agenda-driven opinions the Journal runs with annoying frequency, such as those written by Noon.

Giorgetti makes the case that yes, it does snow even in times of global warming, and says those denying climate change have an agenda – to block movement toward a clean energy economy in order to preserve that of fossil fuels.

Meanwhile, Noon, a so-called expert on climate change, helpfully offers that if there is climate change, “there is nothing humans can do to change what has been going on for millions of years,” so why inconvenience the oil and gas industry with cap and trade and other regulations?

In conclusion, she says cap and trade is nothing more than a tax, so:

. . . support the idea of a carbon tax. It is more honest. And no one wants more taxes.

Simplistic? Yes.

Honest? Not even the Journal seems to know what that means anymore.

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Ignore It And It Might Go Away

March 4th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Arthur Alpert

A lot of Americans are talking about this “cause célèbre,” as N.Y. Times reporter Carl Hulse put it March 2. Senator Jim Bunning’s filibuster, that is, against legislation to extend expiring jobless benefits and keep construction projects – and construction jobs – ongoing.

Bunning says he’s worried about the deficit. Could be, though I’ve read the former major league pitcher may be throwing at fellow Kentucky Republicans who have hit him hard.

Whatever the reason, his GOP mates wish he’d stop. Hulse says they’re looking to resolve “an impasse that is not only having direct consequences on some of their constituents, but also doing some political damage to the Republican brand as well.”

It’s not an earthquake, true, but it’s a colorful, continuing story of some import. Yet the Albuquerque Journal cannot seem to find space for it.

Few New Mexicans, I’ve heard, rely on the Journal for national and international news. While that may be true, it doesn’t relieve the daily of basic journalistic responsibilities, including comprehensive and fair coverage.

I suspect (but cannot be certain that) the Journal’s news judgment in this case reflects concern for the welfare of the GOP.

If we were wagering, that’s how I would bet.

POSTSCRIPT: Sen. Bunning dropped his filibuster and the Senate passed the bill Tuesday. The Albuquerque Journal so reported in an AP Washington Bureau story Wednesday (A8).  AP reporter Andrew Taylor noted that Bunning had been “holding up action for days…”.  Taylor did not question Bunning’s rationale (the deficit) for his objections.

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Winston Brooks Scratches Nose, Journal Writes Story

March 2nd, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Tracy Dingmann

Most people’s tantrums don’t make it to the front page of the newspaper.

But when your name is Winston Brooks and you are the superintendent of Albuquerque Public Schools, then you just might get an A1 story out of the whole thing.

That’s what apparently happened Feb. 23 with the story “APS Threatens to Shut Charters.” The piece explained that Brooks was threatening to revoke four schools’ charters if the schools didn’t turn over certain financial records by Friday, Feb. 26.

According to the story, no one from the charter schools were present at the public meeting at which Brooks made the threat to close them. In fact, representatives from the schools said they knew nothing about Brooks’ threat until they were contacted by a Journal reporter looking for comment on the story.

I know Brooks’ dramatic threat made for a great front-page newspaper story. It was what us ancient newspaper types in the business used to call a “water cooler” piece, because we envisioned people standing around at work chatting about the more controversial or salacious details.

But was this particular “water cooler” story fair?

I don’t know about that. The reporter Hailey Heinz (who doesn’t decide story placement or headlines) does a good job of trying to provide some context about the well-known and “long-simmering tension” between APS and charter schools. Her reporting includes the relevant facts that State Auditor Hector Balderas recently issued a report citing “troubling patterns” among some APS charter schools, and that State Education Secretary Veronica Garcia made a subsequent statement that APS and other districts are entitled to greater scrutiny of charter school’s financial records.

But I’ve talked to many people who thought the placement and the headline and even the fact that Brooks’ threat was published at all was just unfair to the specific charter schools in the story and to charter schools in general.

That’s in addition to the negative and shocked reaction from many parents and staff and other folks involved with the actual schools in question, who had to find out from the paper that Brooks wanted to close their particular school.

Reader unease with the story was reflected in the Journal letters page today, March 2, as several readers wrote in to protest the story.

One reader noted that the charter schools in question had exemplary records in past audits and said…“the grandstanding about these four schools is both a waste of time and vindictive.”

Another reader wrote:

“This latest tantrum with potentially high costs to taxpayers comes from the same guy who inexplicably told the school board as his last evaluation that he was “having a blast” as superintendent – during budget cuts at the actual schools.”

The readers’ cynicism regarding Brooks brings me to another theme behind this Page 1  story – one that is common to newspapers as an institution and of which readers should always be aware.

It’s not exactly a secret, but newspapers tend to favor the establishment (shocking, I know).

Think about it – it’s not often that a newspaper ignores anything said by CEOs and superintendents and corporate public relations people and any other form of official institutional spokesperson.

So when Brooks, as superintendent, goes to the newspaper saying what many believe to be a quite outrageous thing, the newspaper not only listens, but obligingly publishes a front page story (and several follow up stories, including the inevitable “Charter Schools Provide Documents,” on Feb. 25 and a few more after that). The Journal also published an editorial, “Audit Showdown Points to Charter Challenge,” in which it backed up Brook’s threat to close the schools.

Not many of the rest of us average Joes can get that kind of attention and coverage.

The Journal is still operating under the old-school metric in which newspapers used to dominate the news cycle – and got away with deciding FOR us what should be considered news.

But of course, much of that has changed in the last 10 years, with the rise of the Internet and the independent voices now providing information as well as critical analysis of the news flooding in all around us.

Just yesterday, the respected Pew Research Center for the People & and the Press announced survey results showing that more Americans now get their news from their Internet than from newspapers or radio.

Is the decline of top-down media models like newspapers a universally good thing? Not necessarily. I got into the business many years ago because I respected newspaper journalism’s considerable power (and some would say, traditional role) to “comfort the afflicted and afflict the comfortable. “

I am reminded of the very good things a single newspaper story can bring about every time I scan the list of Pulitzer Prize winners and see stories by reporters who’ve taken on corporate waste, government corruption and human rights violations.

You might think I digress, but to me it’s all part of the discussion of journalism today…and a demonstration of how much power the front page of the newspaper – and the people who decide what goes there – can still have among those of us who still bother to read it.

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An Ode To Joline

February 26th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Arthur Alpert

The Albuquerque Journal may be authoritarian, but at least it’s not totalitarian – not one thing, not perfectly honed to its partisan ends.

That’s most apparent in Joline Gutierrez Krueger’s UpFront columns, like the narrative atop the front page Monday, Feb. 22. Under the headline, “It’s Too Late for Teen but Not for Others”, Gutierrez Krueger again explored a family’s tough emotional and concrete reality.

How does she do it? Get so close to people, I mean, and empathize, without getting lost. Sympathize, without losing distance. Describe real life, not abstractions.

And why does the Journal abide her brave, compassionate portraits of troubled (or unlucky) individuals and families? Well, they’re not political, not explicitly. And the Journal’s war against most of us doesn’t preclude sympathy for the downtrodden.Journal management indulges charity, in fact, as much as it hates justice.

I read Gutierrez Krueger as a foreign correspondent wiring dispatches from exotic climes. Warm dispatches, usually, to a mostly cold daily. Painted in crimsons, blacks and purples that contrast sharply with the paper’s palette of blacks, grays and whites – like Nantucket in winter.

Good for the Journal for tolerating an alien (the outer space kind) to its culture.

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Swallowing the Industry’s Take on Food

February 26th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Denise Tessier

Here at ABQjournalWatch.com we try to point out instances where opinion has crept into headlines and news page stories.

I submit opinion — especially industry opinion — has become ingrained in the fabric of other sections of newspapers as well. Long before the U.S. Supreme Court decision that corporations are “persons” entitled to free speech, newspapers, including the Albuquerque Journal, began a pattern of readily giving industry a voice in specially labeled sections.

Although it’s on a local, rather than global corporate level, the Sunday Journal’s Real Estate section, for example, doesn’t take a hard-hitting look at the real estate industry, but serves as a showcase for builders, realtors, home tours and the like. Any rare attempt at viewing the industry with a critical eye is left to the news and business pages.

Readers probably don’t expect the Food section that appears in Wednesday’s Journal to be hard-hitting at all, and likely are satisfied when it’s simply informative. The Journal’s Food section can be that, and it’s at its best when it boasts staff or locally written copy. An example of such a page (Feb. 3) included a staff report by Matt Andazola on menus appropriate for wedding receptions, plus the local Farmers’ Markets column by Denise Miller, who offers advice on when to buy seasonal fruits and vegetables and how to prepare them.

A story by former Albuquerque Journal sports writer Russ Parsons, now a food writer with the Los Angeles Times, anchors this week’s page, giving it a quasi-local quality (and a clever headline – “The Romaine Empire” – on the superiority of crunchy romaine lettuce).

Those in the know have come to accept that many of the stories on food pages  originate with press releases from corporations and food associations that want to encourage the use of their appliances or food products. The stories that result oftentimes are essentially free advertisements, and many readers take these product introductions with a grain of salt, if you’ll excuse the phrase.

Yet, sometimes it’s hard to swallow the industry take that insidiously settles in among the recipes or tips for using the latest kitchen gadget.

Stories on the food page sometimes cry out for a journalistic approach, considering that we live in an age of genetically modified foods, chemical additives and lab-created flavors, sweeteners and fats – in a time when, for example, increasing numbers of consumers have developed intolerance to wheat (possibly prompted by a super gluten that was created by the food industry to make breads and bagels fluffier; you have to go to The Huffington Post or the AlterNet to learn that).

One story that cried out for more research and detail ran Jan. 20 on the Journal’s Food section front, headlined “‘Real’ sugar in soft drinks not likely healthier.”

My first reaction was, “According to whom?”

A headline like that should carry some kind of attribution, as in “’Real’ sugar in soft drinks not likely healthier, expert says.”

But the expert was absent from the story as well as from the headline.

The Journal story was most of an article written by Rosie Mestel of the Los Angeles Times, and its premise was that beverage companies are coming out with vintage formulas for soda pop because of worries about high-fructose corn syrup and claims by many beverage drinkers that soda manufactured with cane or beet sugar, such as Coca Cola made in Mexico, tastes better.

The story talked about “Pepsi Throwback” and other sugar-based drinks being introduced, and appeared to be leading up to a quasi-scientific analysis when it started comparing the chemical compositions of sugar and high-fructose corn syrup. It went so far as to say that:

There are also recent reports that overconsumption of fructose in particular many induce metabolic changes that raise the risk for diabetes and heart disease.

But then it concluded that:

Because the fructose levels in high-fructose corn syrup and sucrose are so similar, there isn’t much reason to suppose that Pepsi Throwback and other “natural sugar” drinks are any healthier.

I doubt anyone would characterize them as healthier, but are they perhaps not as bad? No answer here.

Part of the problem with this story is that it didn’t include the background articles one could find linked in the online version. So, it gives a nod to “recent reports” without naming them, and ends up incomplete.

Another article that attempted to talk about a high fat/salt/sugar product in health terms was the “Food Tidbit” (from the Minneapolis Star-Tribune), which the Journal ran Jan. 27 under this unbelievable headline: “Get your Omega-3 fatty acids in Jif.”

Food products deserve scrutiny when they make health claims, but the writer mostly critiqued the product’s taste, saying he detected no fishy flavor from the anchovy and sardine oil in the “Omega-3” version of Jif , adding – of all things – that it wasn’t salty enough, even though it has 160 milligrams per serving instead of the 150 mg in regular Jif. And the article ignored the product’s 3 grams of sugar per serving and its use of fully hydrogenated vegetable oils. Most Americans don’t realize that all one needs to make peanut butter is to grind up peanuts – adding neither sugar nor salt.

Lest one doubts that the food industry itself has become political, one need only take note of the food tax mess during the recent New Mexico legislative session. Legislators ludicrously parsed the nutritional merits of white vs. brown bread, corn vs. flour tortillas, in trying to decide whether to revive a tax on foods.

Journal UpFront columnist Thom Cole did a good job – with an appropriate tone of incredulity and sarcasm – when he summarized what legislators were contemplating with his Feb. 17 article, “Put Down That Twinkie, Food Cops Are Coming.” From that column, readers learned that items approved for purchase by participants in the Special Supplemental Nutrition Program for Women, Infants and Children (WIC) would have been tax free, which sounds simple until one realizes that the state’s Health Department Web site lists 168 pages of WIC-approved items on fresh and frozen vegetables alone.

We also learned that because neither Whole Foods nor Trader Joe’s are vendors in the WIC program, all of their signature brands would have been taxed. “Smith’s shoppers wouldn’t have to pay taxes on their pinto beans, but shoppers at Whole Foods would,” Cole wrote. The column flowed with good research and reporting until one line stopped me like a red light:

The real grocery stores — like Albertsons, Lowe’s and Smith’s — participate in WIC and would be able to apply to the Health Department to make more of their items tax-free.

The real grocery stores? Now, I’m no fan of Whole Foods, especially since their hostile takeover and closure of Wild Oats. (Novelist Elizabeth Berg appropriately refers to the chain as Whole Paycheck in one of her books.) And I understand Cole’s point, that some people have the wrong idea about Whole Foods and Trader Joe’s. But to make that point, he should have put “real” in quote marks, i.e.:

The “real” grocery stores — like Albertsons, Lowe’s and Smith’s — participate in WIC and would be able to apply to the Health Department to make more of their items tax-free.

Calling the corporate stores that carry GMO and heavily processed foods “real” grocery stores is akin to saying those that carry organic and more healthful selections aren’t. (Notice how we’ve even acquiesced to the corporate line in our language? In the “real” world, unadulterated food would be just “food” in no need of an “organic” label; it’s the non-organic stuff that should be labeled with all the alterations and concoctions that have taken place.)

One might even argue that Albertsons or Smith’s aren’t  “real” grocery stores anymore, seeing as  these supermarkets sell processed food-like products, paper goods, hardware, automotive items and pesticides, with a proportionately small section of farm- and ranch-produced foods thrown in.

Because of corporate influence – on both the production and selling ends of what we eat – food has become politicized. It’s time reporters, headline writers and editors tried their best to not buy into the industry line, but rather serve the consumer – the reader – when covering food and food issues, especially when it come to food products and health.

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Op-Ed Page a Haphazard “He Said-She Said” Smorgasbord

February 24th, 2010 · Uncategorized

By Denise Tessier

I had been wondering when the Albuquerque Journal would offer up the story that appeared on the front page Monday, Feb. 22 about the mayor and the firefighters’ union.

What initially piqued my interest wasn’t the issue itself, but rather a column the Journal ran on its Op-Ed (opposite editorial) page on Feb. 15, entitled “Berry Gives AFD The Cold Shoulder” (subscription required). That particular column caught my eye because it obviously had not been edited.

The piece was written by a firefighter, who can’t be expected to know journalistic writing style, and the column’s blatant non-adherence to basic Journal style would have made it clear enough that no one at the state’s largest newspaper took the time to proofread and edit it.

But as further proof, a written piece with the exact wording by the same firefighter appeared Feb. 11 in the Weekly Alibi, four days earlier, boxed and labeled “Paid Advertisement.”

This post is not meant to pick on the firefighter’s column, but to question the Journal’s willy nilly publishing of columns, with little or no fact-checking or editing, a practice that turns the Op-Ed page into a “he said-she said” smorgasbord of opinions, without benefit of a reporter or staff columnist to sort it all out.

After noticing the firefighter’s column, I wondered whether the Journal would address the allegations it had made. Monday’s front-page story, as it turns out, did not. What it did explain is that union leaders at City Hall draw government salaries while working full time on union duties, a practice a District Judge ruled legal earlier this month. It then collected comments on the issue from city councilors, who predictably were split along party lines.

It did not address or even make reference to the allegations in the firefighter’s column, two of which warranted at least some reportage. These were that:

  • In a time of financial hardship the mayor has hired a “well-known union-busting firm” that the firefighter says has a vested interest in “turning labor against the mayor.”
  • The mayor’s chief administrative officer has repeatedly canceled meetings on ways the city can make up its budget shortfall.  Firefighter/columnist Mathew D. Blanchfield claims that his union has “ideas that could cut over a million dollars from (Albuquerque Fire Department’s) budget just this year.” What are those ideas?

This column was thrown at the public, with no follow up or indication of whether the firefighter’s allegations have any traction. Furthermore, it’s hard for readers to follow the story when so much time lapses between random “installments.” Monday’s “Union Work on City’s Dime” appeared a full week after the firefighter’s column (understandably because reporters’ attention necessarily was focused on the Legislature), and the firefighter’s Feb. 15 column was taking issue with a Journal story from Jan. 28.

That the Journal ran the firefighter’s column unedited was clear — even before discovering the identical copy in the Alibi ad — because of basic style errors Op-Ed page editors neglected to fix. The first paragraph referred to the union president as “Mr. Diego Arencon,” and the Journal, unlike The New York Times, does not use the term “Mr.” (And even the Times doesn’t use Mr. on first reference). Use of Mr. is not Journal style, which calls for use of full names on first reference, last name only after that.

In this particular column, an even more egregious example of editing neglect was the fact that the “Berry” in the headline was never explained as Albuquerque Mayor Richard Berry in the column; any reader from out of town likely would have no clue as to who the “Berry” in the headline might be. While there are references to “the mayor”, the first doesn’t appear until the third paragraph. Berry is mentioned only once, and then only as “Berry” as part of a Journal story quote from Jan. 28.

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